Typos

[Captain Jack]

Effect is multiplied though, not hours. This is where your confusion lies.

[TheLoveTiger]

Just keeping you on your toes, I knew that lol


Just minor typo's then in the confusion description

[Captain Jack]

How should it be instead? Avenge works with any 3 or more (or more than 2 as used at the card) voodoo (no need to be active).

[TheLoveTiger]

Sorry you might of missed the first part of my post:

It says multipled where it should say multiplied
And also it says casted when it should just be cast.

These are actual typos in the description, for confusion.

[Admiral Nelson]

Perhaps this?

"If the target player has cast 3 or more voodoo cards against you in the last 24 hours, the effect of X is multiplied." (X being the card name)

[TheLoveTiger]

Perhaps this?

"If the target player has cast 3 or more voodoo cards against you in the last 24 hours, the effect of X is multiplied." (X being the card name)

+1 that is better wording than current.

[Captain Jack]

Ok, I have fixed the typo and improved the wording.

I could not spot the Afghani typo issue.

[TheLoveTiger]

Just read back and you said "casted" will remain as is, so ignore that one.


But the last word is misspelled "multipled"


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[Dejanira]

I could not spot the Afghani typo issue.

I have it while searching in all the
Most Notorious players
Most Influential players
Recently Joined

If you select Afghanistan, the game changes it to Afganistan (with a missing h)

[PFH]

Typo and grammar report:

Anything with % around them is where the fix is needed**

Anything with ? around them means that it can be fixed in more than 1 way or can be left alone**

Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=friendlist

“You can ask your friends to add you%, this way %you will be able to contact them anytime online.”

In my opinion, it should say, “You can ask your friends to add you. This way, you will be able to contact them anytime online.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=friendlist

“You can BLOCK someone if you do not want to see %him %there. Simply click on their name on the %popup% list and then on the block icon. You can manage %this% kind of blocks through the settings icon at the bottom panel.”

In my opinion, it should read, “You can BLOCK someone if you do not want to see him/her there. Simply click on their name on the pop-up list and then on the block icon. You can manage these kind of blocks through the settings icon at the bottom panel.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=friendlist

“To appear on someone %else% Friends Online List, you need to add them in your friendlist.”

In my opinion, it should be, “To appear on someone else’s Friends Online List, you need to add them in your friendlist.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=livenotif

“You also need to have your chat bar (instant %messager% bar at the bottom) to receive them at the exact moment.”

Should be, “You also need to have your chat bar (instant messenger bar at the bottom) to receive them at the exact moment.
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=livenotif

“ • You have linked Pirates Glory to your Facebook account%%”

In my opinion, the list style which ends in a period (.) should match throughout the list for the Facebook section.
Should be, “ • You have linked Pirates Glory to your Facebook account.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“3.Duke - Maximum 10 per update. %Must have been at least a Marquess in last update%”

I think the marked error should be in parenthesis. Should say, “3.Duke - Maximum 10 per update. (Must have been at least a Marquess in last update.)
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“4.Marquess (Last rank you can achieve with missions. From there after, influence determines higher promotions%).%”

Periods go inside the parenthesis markings.
Should be, “ 4.Marquess (Last rank you can achieve with missions. From there after, influence determines higher promotions.)”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“-You can have titles to only one %Nation% at any given time. If you attempt to gain titles to a new nation, you must first forfeit all your titles at your previous nation. Same happens if you become a pirate (%No% titles for Pirates yet%).%”

Nation does not need to be capitalized, as shown in the 2nd sentence of this quote when it is not capitalized.
The beginning word in the parenthesis does not need to be capitalized, as the parenthesis does not start after the end of the sentence.
Periods need to be inside the parenthesis instead of the outside.

Should be, “-You can have titles to only one nation at any given time. If you attempt to gain titles to a new nation, you must first forfeit all your titles at your previous nation. Same happens if you become a pirate (no titles for Pirates yet.)”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“-All rank bonuses add up. For example%, %being a Colonel, you get both the 25% cheaper recruitment and 25% cheaper building costs.”

When leading to examples, the set up should be, “For example:”

Should be, in my opinion, “-All rank bonuses add up. For example: being a Colonel, you get both the 25% cheaper recruitment and 25% cheaper building costs.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“*Recruitment does not require influence%%”

List style should match as this sentence does not end in a period (.) like the rest of the list does follow.
Should be, “*Recruitment does not require influence.”
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“Citizens cannot vote for nation decisions%%”

Should have a period (.) at the end of the sentence.
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“*+10% fame earned from plunder (ie if you earn 1000 fame, you earn a bonus of 10%, aka 100 fame more%)%”

The point should have a period (.) at the end of the sentence.
Should be, “*+10% fame earned from plunder (ie if you earn 1000 fame, you earn a bonus of 10%, aka 100 fame more.)
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“Historically, ?Marquesses? were given land on the borders of a nation. This meant that a ?marquess? was trusted to defend and fortify against potentially hostile neighbors and was thus more important and ranked higher than a count.”

“A step up from ?Captain?, becoming a ?Major? traditionally was 'a better pay bracket' as well as superiority of a ?Captain?.”

“Dukes were the rulers of the provinces and the superiors of the ?counts? in the cities and later, in the feudal monarchies, the highest-ranking peers of the ?king?.”

“Governors are honored ?Dukes? that take charge of a colony in Pirates Glory.”

These all confuse me because I’m not sure if they refer to captain as being a proper noun unless stating the name of a specific captain like Captain Jack for example. I am also not sure if they just refer to the proper noun of the title. If they are meant to be used for a proper noun as a name of a specific person, then they should not be capitalized. If the words refer to the title itself, then that should be capitalized. The one that confuses me the most is “Historically, ?Marquesses? were given land on the borders of a nation. This meant that a ?marquess? was trusted to defend and fortify against potentially hostile neighbors and was thus more important and ranked higher than a count.” It isn’t clear whether the questioned errors refer to the title or refer to just as a marquess. It looks like they are to refer to the title itself, but the formality of the rank’s name is not followed throughout the sentence as it starts as Marquesses, then moves to marquess in the next sentence.

I just need clarification on these, as I am confused on this section of errors.
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=titles

“*You earn +1% (cap: 50k) Fame every update you keep the King position%.%”

“*+2% profit on market sales (Gold Bars?).?”

These points do not follow the no period formality like the rest do in the other sections, such as:
“*Name depicted in a nation controlled port”
“*Ship upgrades cost less (10% cheaper - not port specific, you get it anywhere)”
and
“*Further bonus to ship building costs and cannon purchases, cost less (+15% for a total of 30% cheaper)”

The 2nd quote, “*+2% profit on market sales (Gold Bars?).?”, is questionable, as it does not need the period because of the formality and style of the other points in the index article and because if there IS a needed period at the end of the points, that the period is not inside the parenthesis. If periods (.) are needed at the end of the points, then all of the ranks in this section need fixed as many have no periods at the end of the listed points.
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Location: http://s2.piratesglory.com/?page=help&action=influence

“*You lose 1% of your port influence right after the map update%; only for ports you have 5000 influence or more.%”

The semicolon isn’t really needed. The sentence after the semicolon just need to be in parenthesis, as it is a condition of the previous sentence and not an independent of it.

Should be, “*You lose 1% of your port influence right after the map update (only for ports in which you have 5000 influence or more.)
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All I have so far. I’ll look through some other time for more in the help index.