"If a caster tries to cast a card with NoPirate on a pirate, then he will get an error message and no vooodoo or turns will be consumed."
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... n=nopirateSpelled as vooodoo instead of voodoo.
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"For example, Avenge 5 multiples any effect described by the card, by 5."
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... ion=avengeNot a typo, but a grammar check: I think it should say, "For example, Avenge 5 multiplies any effect, described by the card, by 5."
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"NoFail ignores defenses (ie Mindbar,Countercurse etc)."
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... ion=nofailNot a typo, but a grammar check: I think it should say, "NoFail ignores defenses (ie Mindbar, Countercurse, etc.)"
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"All Artifacts are NoFail except stated otherwise."
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... ion=nofailNot a typo, but adverb confusion. I think it should say, "All Artifacts are NoFail except when stated otherwise." The previous makes 'stated otherwise' look like the exception and not the cards that actually state otherwise. Makes 'stated otherwise' look like an object.
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"Every voodoo card needs turns in order to be casted."
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overviewCasted is an old form. Examples are easily found in texts from every century from the 14th to the present—but it has given way to cast in modern English.
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"(Witch Hut) - Obtain new Voodoo cards (through credits)"
"(Market) - Trade/Exchange Voodoo cards with other players (through an auction/bidding system)"
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overviewBoth of these are not complete sentences, as they do not end in a period, question mark, or exclamation mark. These should end as (through credits.) and (auction/bidding system.)
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"(Voodoo log) -Keep"
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overviewThis does not match the (word) - Start format you have set for the previous points. It should be "(Voodoo log) - Keep" instead.
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"You can currently obtain cards with the following (3) Ways:"
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overview"Ways" does not need to be capitalized, as it is not a proper noun or a start of a sentence.
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"Typically 5 a day)"
Under
http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overviewShould end in a period, as this is an incomplete thought, or this can be combined with the previous sentence. Could be rewritten to say, "(Win up to 4 presents on your own + whatever presents other players will send you, which will add up to 5 a day typically.)"
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"Through Credits at the Witch Hut"
"Buy them with credits from other players at the market (Also read above)"
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http://s2.piratesglory.com/index.php?pa ... e=overviewThese should end in periods to match the rest of the format of this overview. After all, most of the bullet points end in periods.
I'm too lazy to talk about the rest this late at night, so I'll just repost more later.